I must admit to some disappointment here. While the powers list is good, it says it's for Savage Worlds, it seems a bit haphazardly put together. There are a couple of quirks that bother ME, but that's a personal choice. I think that the powers are well thought out, just kind of weak in execution. Again, that may just be me.
I think my real issue with this is that it is very poorly edited. Spelling and grammatical errors, awkward sentence structures... It makes it very hard to read through and enjoy, when I am constantly looking for the next error.
The idea is good, and it's pretty good work. I just think it needed some more polishing and cleanup, to make it top of the line for me.
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